I like to acknowledge the fact that this a overall great post. I feel as though the choice of Trent Reznor was commendable. I know very little about Reznor and who he was. From the information of your post, I could get a clear synopsis of who and what he has accomplished in his career. As for your Electronic Music: Kraftwerk I like the way that each paragraph transitions into each other. Andy you have a well-written paper. The only thing you might want to prevent are spelling errors. There were a few; you should consider using spell check. You seem to know how to write a well-structured essay.
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